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Writing Connection
Write
Day 9
Strong Introductions WORD CHOICE
Display Strong Introductions. Tell students that an important aspect of
opinion writing is to provide a strong introductory statement that will get
the audience interested in your writing. Read the paragraph aloud. Then
read the three introduction options that follow.
__________ Exercise helps
people maintain a strong and
healthy body. Exercise even helps
people sleep better at night. In
addition, people who exercise
are more likely to have a positive
outlook on life. As you can
see, there are many benefits to
exercise.
Possible Introductions
1. If you’ve ever played sports,
you know there are many
benefits to exercise.
2. Video games are not healthy
for kids.
3. Whether you’re playing outside
with friends or working in your
backyard, exercise is great.
Model your thought process in selecting the strongest introduction.
Say: I won’t choose Introduction 2 because it doesn’t relate directly
to the topic. The other two introductions are stronger. Guide students
in choosing between the remaining two options for the strongest
introductory statement and support their choice with reasons.
1. Discuss an Essential Question
Display the Essential Question Pair and Share. For three minutes, have
students Pair and Share to discuss their understanding of why it is important
to conduct research before making a proposal. Ask how their understanding
has improved based on what they learned from their research.
Have pairs share highlights of their discussion with the class. Discuss
with students how this question relates to their proposals. Record student
comments. Then remind them to consider this question as they revise
their draft.
WHOLE CLASS 5
Mins
PROJECT TEAM 10
Mins
Brainstorm
responses as a
class, and record
ideas. Lead students
in composing a
paragraph using the
generated ideas.
Write the paragraph,
and have students
copy it.